email from Nathan (Item 7)

Reassessment

One criticism I've received of the work is that it's perhaps too committed to the façade of an objective observation, and I'll admit, especially without exposition like the above, it does in part conceal my opinions on AI. This is an instinct, I try not to allow too much colour into my voice, that comes partly from my experience in news which demands neutral aesthetics. Primarily, though, it's because I feel a good audience is least receptive to invocations if they feel like they're attending a sermon. But maybe that's just me! What do you think? If you have criticism I'd love to hear it!